So I stuck the best image I could create of the Scions semi-translucent in the background. The problems I see:
I hate the way Azerick looks faded out. Will have to fix that.
The Scions' eyes match the background. They aren't hollow, just similar.
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Looking good just do the fixes you already said.
ReplyDeleteThat is a pretty solid cover
ReplyDeleteHmm just thought of an idea (you may or may not like it) what if you changed the reflection of Azerick to Karalax. Or maybe make something in the reflection that you can't see anywhere else.
ReplyDeleteI had thought about that, but since it was a refection and not just a shadow it would take more effort than I felt like putting in at the time. I'll look into it when I start staring blankly at my screen.
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ReplyDeleteThank you, I truly appreciate it. I hope I can reproduce the same enjoyment with whatever I come up with next. Seeing the end of the series rapidly approaching is a bit frightening.
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